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Post by CrawHawk IV on March 10th 2012, 5:09 am

non coloured:


coloured:


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Post by Hiei on March 10th 2012, 7:29 am

- Legs are wierd .
- I don't like the flat chest . Razz

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Post by G man on March 10th 2012, 11:35 am

Ankit Reborn wrote:
- I don't like the flat chest . Razz

No one does.

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Re: Angel Naomi

Post by Yush on March 10th 2012, 11:58 am

The G wrote:
Ankit Reborn wrote:
- I don't like the flat chest . Razz

No one does.

I rly doubt you haven't heard of the term 'lolicon'

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Post by CrawHawk IV on March 10th 2012, 12:21 pm

yush wat wat is your critism??? thats wat im waiting for!!

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Re: Angel Naomi

Post by ACE KyoUno on March 10th 2012, 12:21 pm

Well, not bad, but it hardly can be called pure anime.
Nevertheless, it is drawn well.

But What's the concept with an angel standing on the table under the god light?

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Post by Rhino.Freak on March 10th 2012, 12:42 pm

needs more boobies .. nice anyway! 8/10

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Re: Angel Naomi

Post by its confirmed again on March 10th 2012, 1:18 pm

The G wrote:
No one does.









lies (loli fan pedos, general pedos, homosexuals, etc. and me ;3)
and it doesnt need a bigger chest. the lineart is weird and probably rushed, same with the colouring. just see the white unfilled parts on the wing.
almost no shading or depth can be seen
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Re: Angel Naomi

Post by Yush on March 11th 2012, 12:08 am

Lol, I won't say too much cuz I could literally fill this entire page with criticism:
1) Get your proportions right
2) Make sure your anatomy looks natural, cuz right now most of the limbs positions don't make sense
3) Your colouring is typical amateur: make sure you learn about lighting and how shadowing works. All you're doing is colouring lightly and then it gets darker as you span out, which looks downright weird
4) Her wings look like they're coming out just from above her hips lol

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Post by Phoenix on March 11th 2012, 2:37 am

@Yush wrote:Lol, I won't say too much cuz I could literally fill this entire page with criticism:
1) Get your proportions right
2) Make sure your anatomy looks natural, cuz right now most of the limbs positions don't make sense
3) Your colouring is typical amateur: make sure you learn about lighting and how shadowing works. All you're doing is colouring lightly and then it gets darker as you span out, which looks downright weird
4) Her wings look like they're coming out just from above her hips lol

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Post by its confirmed again on March 11th 2012, 2:58 am

@Phoenix wrote:
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he is right though, Mr. 4chan
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Post by Zeiin on March 11th 2012, 3:28 am

That's a girl? I thought it was a guy...

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Re: Angel Naomi

Post by Yush on March 11th 2012, 5:39 am

@Phoenix wrote:
@Yush wrote:Lol, I won't say too much cuz I could literally fill this entire page with criticism:
1) Get your proportions right
2) Make sure your anatomy looks natural, cuz right now most of the limbs positions don't make sense
3) Your colouring is typical amateur: make sure you learn about lighting and how shadowing works. All you're doing is colouring lightly and then it gets darker as you span out, which looks downright weird
4) Her wings look like they're coming out just from above her hips lol

Are you gonna be all up in my face every time?

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Post by Hiei on March 11th 2012, 8:13 am

Wiza wrote:That's a girl? I thought it was a guy...

Exactly !

@ A make things more Round , you know what I mean . Razz

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Post by Phoenix on March 11th 2012, 10:14 am

@Yush
it had to be done

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Re: Angel Naomi

Post by CrawHawk IV on March 12th 2012, 8:02 am

yea k, i will work on things you said...........yush

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