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Post by CrawHawk IV March 10th 2012, 4:09 am

non coloured:
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coloured:
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Post by Hiei March 10th 2012, 6:29 am

- Legs are wierd .
- I don't like the flat chest . Razz
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Post by G man March 10th 2012, 10:35 am

Ankit Reborn wrote:
- I don't like the flat chest . Razz

No one does. Angel Naomi 149554
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Post by Yush March 10th 2012, 10:58 am

The G wrote:
Ankit Reborn wrote:
- I don't like the flat chest . Razz

No one does. Angel Naomi 149554

I rly doubt you haven't heard of the term 'lolicon'
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Post by CrawHawk IV March 10th 2012, 11:21 am

yush wat wat is your critism??? thats wat im waiting for!!
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Post by ACE KyoUno March 10th 2012, 11:21 am

Well, not bad, but it hardly can be called pure anime.
Nevertheless, it is drawn well.

But What's the concept with an angel standing on the table under the god light?
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Post by Rhino.Freak March 10th 2012, 11:42 am

needs more boobies .. nice anyway! 8/10
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Post by its confirmed again March 10th 2012, 12:18 pm

The G wrote:
No one does. Angel Naomi 149554









lies (loli fan pedos, general pedos, homosexuals, etc. and me ;3)
and it doesnt need a bigger chest. the lineart is weird and probably rushed, same with the colouring. just see the white unfilled parts on the wing.
almost no shading or depth can be seen
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Post by Yush March 10th 2012, 11:08 pm

Lol, I won't say too much cuz I could literally fill this entire page with criticism:
1) Get your proportions right
2) Make sure your anatomy looks natural, cuz right now most of the limbs positions don't make sense
3) Your colouring is typical amateur: make sure you learn about lighting and how shadowing works. All you're doing is colouring lightly and then it gets darker as you span out, which looks downright weird
4) Her wings look like they're coming out just from above her hips lol
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Post by Phoenix March 11th 2012, 1:37 am

Yush wrote:Lol, I won't say too much cuz I could literally fill this entire page with criticism:
1) Get your proportions right
2) Make sure your anatomy looks natural, cuz right now most of the limbs positions don't make sense
3) Your colouring is typical amateur: make sure you learn about lighting and how shadowing works. All you're doing is colouring lightly and then it gets darker as you span out, which looks downright weird
4) Her wings look like they're coming out just from above her hips lol
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Post by its confirmed again March 11th 2012, 1:58 am

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he is right though, Mr. 4chan
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Post by Zeiin March 11th 2012, 2:28 am

That's a girl? I thought it was a guy...
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Post by Yush March 11th 2012, 4:39 am

Phoenix wrote:
Yush wrote:Lol, I won't say too much cuz I could literally fill this entire page with criticism:
1) Get your proportions right
2) Make sure your anatomy looks natural, cuz right now most of the limbs positions don't make sense
3) Your colouring is typical amateur: make sure you learn about lighting and how shadowing works. All you're doing is colouring lightly and then it gets darker as you span out, which looks downright weird
4) Her wings look like they're coming out just from above her hips lol
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Are you gonna be all up in my face every time?
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Post by Hiei March 11th 2012, 7:13 am

Wiza wrote:That's a girl? I thought it was a guy...

Exactly !

@ A make things more Round , you know what I mean . Razz
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Post by Phoenix March 11th 2012, 9:14 am

@Yush
it had to be done
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Post by CrawHawk IV March 12th 2012, 7:02 am

yea k, i will work on things you said...........yush
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