Angel Naomi
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Angel Naomi
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coloured:
CnC
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CnC
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Re: Angel Naomi
- Legs are wierd .
- I don't like the flat chest .
- I don't like the flat chest .
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Ankit Reborn wrote:
- I don't like the flat chest .
No one does.
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The G wrote:Ankit Reborn wrote:
- I don't like the flat chest .
No one does.
I rly doubt you haven't heard of the term 'lolicon'
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yush wat wat is your critism??? thats wat im waiting for!!
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Well, not bad, but it hardly can be called pure anime.
Nevertheless, it is drawn well.
But What's the concept with an angel standing on the table under the god light?
Nevertheless, it is drawn well.
But What's the concept with an angel standing on the table under the god light?
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The G wrote:
No one does.
lies (loli fan pedos, general pedos, homosexuals, etc. and me ;3)
and it doesnt need a bigger chest. the lineart is weird and probably rushed, same with the colouring. just see the white unfilled parts on the wing.
almost no shading or depth can be seen
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Lol, I won't say too much cuz I could literally fill this entire page with criticism:
1) Get your proportions right
2) Make sure your anatomy looks natural, cuz right now most of the limbs positions don't make sense
3) Your colouring is typical amateur: make sure you learn about lighting and how shadowing works. All you're doing is colouring lightly and then it gets darker as you span out, which looks downright weird
4) Her wings look like they're coming out just from above her hips lol
1) Get your proportions right
2) Make sure your anatomy looks natural, cuz right now most of the limbs positions don't make sense
3) Your colouring is typical amateur: make sure you learn about lighting and how shadowing works. All you're doing is colouring lightly and then it gets darker as you span out, which looks downright weird
4) Her wings look like they're coming out just from above her hips lol
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Yush wrote:Lol, I won't say too much cuz I could literally fill this entire page with criticism:
1) Get your proportions right
2) Make sure your anatomy looks natural, cuz right now most of the limbs positions don't make sense
3) Your colouring is typical amateur: make sure you learn about lighting and how shadowing works. All you're doing is colouring lightly and then it gets darker as you span out, which looks downright weird
4) Her wings look like they're coming out just from above her hips lol
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Phoenix wrote:
a
he is right though, Mr. 4chan
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That's a girl? I thought it was a guy...
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Re: Angel Naomi
Phoenix wrote:Yush wrote:Lol, I won't say too much cuz I could literally fill this entire page with criticism:
1) Get your proportions right
2) Make sure your anatomy looks natural, cuz right now most of the limbs positions don't make sense
3) Your colouring is typical amateur: make sure you learn about lighting and how shadowing works. All you're doing is colouring lightly and then it gets darker as you span out, which looks downright weird
4) Her wings look like they're coming out just from above her hips lol
Are you gonna be all up in my face every time?
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Wiza wrote:That's a girl? I thought it was a guy...
Exactly !
@ A make things more Round , you know what I mean .
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@Yush
it had to be done
it had to be done
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yea k, i will work on things you said...........yush
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