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Post by -samael- October 12th 2012, 10:26 am

Yay guys... How everybody know(I think) i'm not spriter but KENTARU said that i should try... so i've tryed... Tell me what you think guys. I saw this position on anime when he fight against Tobi. I need to fix the leg :\


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Post by iFlame975 October 12th 2012, 10:28 am

The hair looks fine, his coat could use some work but yeah as you said his leg needs fixing.
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Post by Rhino.Freak October 12th 2012, 11:09 am

pretty good if you are trying it for the first time..
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do some shading,
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Post by Red October 12th 2012, 11:13 am

This is great , diggin the stance. Shading is barely visible.
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Post by -samael- October 12th 2012, 7:29 pm

Ow yeah... Is my first time... second to be true... haha


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Post by Hiei October 12th 2012, 7:37 pm

Not bad tbh they are good considering they are your first/second trials .
By practicing a bit more you'll become really great .
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Post by Elmo86 October 13th 2012, 12:36 am

It's good to be your first time, but the background you chose not help much, almost no distinction between the background and the background layer.
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Post by iFlame975 October 13th 2012, 3:45 am

Its looking good but I guess the face could be worked on.
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Post by -samael- October 15th 2012, 6:09 am

@Mark975- This is what tobi said to me :p


Now one more sprite.. This time i just copy the head... so ignore it uberserious


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Post by iFlame975 October 15th 2012, 8:22 am

His right arm looks weird.
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Post by chikido_rugi October 15th 2012, 8:43 am

i think the left arm is more weird Rolling Eyes
and btw, you shaded his armor like it was a box or something
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Post by iFlame975 October 15th 2012, 9:38 am

Yeah his armour seems to be poking out.
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Post by kakashi1 October 15th 2012, 1:47 pm

madara's stomach needs to be a bit more wide.rest minato is excellent!!
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Post by Rhino.Freak October 15th 2012, 5:00 pm

madara's stance reminds me of proud saiyans in dbz lol.. but really good i'd say
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