Paaam!
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Paaam!
Please point to mistakes
Swordsmen-
Raikage-
some Uchiha-
Swordsmen-
Raikage-
some Uchiha-
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... The swordsmen i'm mading...
Ventus- Chunnin of the Leaf
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Raikage got great legs....
-Shivam-- Desert Breeze
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The swordmen looks ok, but you could've give his arm a little shading and more depth.
Raikage eyes are to huge and his legs look weird.
Some uchiha is pretty awesome but from my perspective, he look slanted a little.
Overall I give it a 6.75/10.
Raikage eyes are to huge and his legs look weird.
Some uchiha is pretty awesome but from my perspective, he look slanted a little.
Overall I give it a 6.75/10.
waxgyi- Chunnin of the Leaf
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Are comments, thanks for the views expressed herein
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Improve the face a little with the complete and you'll have a 8.5/10 from me.
waxgyi- Chunnin of the Leaf
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when did raikage get his left arm cut off!?(same goes for tobirama)
5/10
5/10
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A bit more work than usually
Darui
Too lazy to adjust the sword under the right angle
Darui
Too lazy to adjust the sword under the right angle
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xxxuchihaxxx wrote:A bit more work than usually
Darui
Too lazy to adjust the sword under the right angle
Well, these ones are A LOT better then previous ones, though the form needs some work, looks a bit too skinny, slim. Keep up the good form.
Neko- St. Zerachiel
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You're skill are increase's drastically, fix sarutobi stomach.
waxgyi- Chunnin of the Leaf
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Not sure if it's just me or are the arms way too skinny?
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else swordsmen-
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xxxuchihaxxx- Health : 0
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Body is too long compared to the legs.
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Mangetsu Sprite - Hair needs some fixing, the face is alright, his hands need more work, his body is too out there if that makes sense, legs alright, feet need work.
Zabuza Sprite - Hair alright, headband and face need working on, he leans back too much so fix that, his right arm needs work, legs and feet are alright.
Zabuza Sprite - Hair alright, headband and face need working on, he leans back too much so fix that, his right arm needs work, legs and feet are alright.
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Kakashi looks great but fix his arm.
waxgyi- Chunnin of the Leaf
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needs more detailing..
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