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Post by xxxuchihaxxx February 10th 2013, 7:51 pm

Please point to mistakes
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Post by Ventus February 13th 2013, 4:50 am

... The swordsmen i'm mading...
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Post by -Shivam- February 13th 2013, 8:40 am

Raikage got great legs....
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Post by waxgyi February 13th 2013, 10:51 pm

The swordmen looks ok, but you could've give his arm a little shading and more depth.
Raikage eyes are to huge and his legs look weird.
Some uchiha is pretty awesome but from my perspective, he look slanted a little.
Overall I give it a 6.75/10.

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Post by xxxuchihaxxx February 14th 2013, 5:43 pm

Are comments, thanks for the views expressed herein
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Post by waxgyi February 15th 2013, 1:22 am

Improve the face a little with the complete and you'll have a 8.5/10 from me.

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Post by BioHazard February 16th 2013, 10:43 am

when did raikage get his left arm cut off!?(same goes for tobirama) lol!
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Post by xxxuchihaxxx February 16th 2013, 6:29 pm

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Post by iFlame975 February 17th 2013, 12:28 am

You should work on their faces...
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Post by xxxuchihaxxx February 17th 2013, 5:10 pm

A bit more work than usually
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Too lazy to adjust the sword under the right angle

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Post by Neko February 17th 2013, 7:37 pm

xxxuchihaxxx wrote:A bit more work than usually
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Too lazy to adjust the sword under the right angle

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Well, these ones are A LOT better then previous ones, though the form needs some work, looks a bit too skinny, slim. Keep up the good form.
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Post by xxxuchihaxxx February 19th 2013, 6:35 pm

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Post by waxgyi February 19th 2013, 9:48 pm

You're skill are increase's drastically, fix sarutobi stomach.

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Post by xxxuchihaxxx February 21st 2013, 5:35 pm

New:
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Post by Kezeal February 21st 2013, 5:59 pm

Not sure if it's just me or are the arms way too skinny?
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Post by xxxuchihaxxx February 22nd 2013, 5:53 pm

else swordsmen-
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Post by Kezeal February 22nd 2013, 7:13 pm

Body is too long compared to the legs.
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Post by xxxuchihaxxx February 24th 2013, 11:34 am

Swordsmen#3(mangetsu)
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Post by xxxuchihaxxx February 25th 2013, 8:07 pm

Zabuza:
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Post by iFlame975 February 26th 2013, 8:45 am

Mangetsu Sprite - Hair needs some fixing, the face is alright, his hands need more work, his body is too out there if that makes sense, legs alright, feet need work.

Zabuza Sprite - Hair alright, headband and face need working on, he leans back too much so fix that, his right arm needs work, legs and feet are alright.
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Post by xxxuchihaxxx February 27th 2013, 9:58 pm

Kakashi
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Post by waxgyi February 28th 2013, 5:07 am

Kakashi looks great but fix his arm.

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Post by xxxuchihaxxx March 1st 2013, 8:46 pm

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Post by iFlame975 March 2nd 2013, 12:47 am

Why is his sword going through his back?
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Post by jassisngh12 March 2nd 2013, 12:42 pm

needs more detailing..
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