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Post by FeniX112 on July 17th 2015, 3:54 pm

Neji (sheet in progress) Xm99ir
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I have a feeling I am not able to do proper gifs.

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Post by Rhino.Freak on July 17th 2015, 5:10 pm

Well I assume you're new to animating, since my first animations turned out similar as well. (I didn't do much after that lolz)
it is quite stiff because you didn't animate the whole body and only certain parts.
I can suggest a few things:
- rotate the face for some angles in his walking sprites, also his legs seem too thin. (Look at Naruto's sheet from the game Ninja Council 4)
- lower Neji's whole upper body by 1-2 pixels in one of the frames in running.
- 3rd animation is Waay too fast for me to actually see the movements clearly.

Keep it up!
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Post by Hiei on July 17th 2015, 5:28 pm

@FeniX112 wrote:Neji (sheet in progress) Xm99ir
Neji (sheet in progress) 2r258qw
Neji (sheet in progress) 2j46q0o
Neji (sheet in progress) 2n17239

I have a feeling I am not able to do proper gifs.

He looks stiff. The sprite is cool but yea the animation needs more flexibility.

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Post by The Creator on July 17th 2015, 5:55 pm

Michael Jackson!? oh shit

I'm going to do the right thing by quoting Rhino and Ankit. lol!

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Post by Triv on July 17th 2015, 8:43 pm

The animations are fairly stiff as everyone has previously mentioned and the proportions look off on the stance. The legs should be longer and he seems to be leaning over to one side
Otherwise you're making some pretty good progress. Keep it up

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Post by FeniX112 on July 19th 2015, 6:25 am

I appreciate your comments, first was very useful (but grr, guys please, do not repeat yourselves, I believed Rhino :p_. I am not new to animations but never was spriting on that little size. It will be very hard to change - for example - face angle in single frame but I will try and do my best. Although thanks for all comments - surely it is some effort.

@Triv leaning sides? In attack animation he is turning around - this is what u are writeing about?

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