Re: An actual NTSD series based on manga's

by Raka January 4th 2010, 6:41 pm

Dom!n for agreement post , you're ..

An actual NTSD series based on manga's - Page 10 Warned

by **Eredale** January 4th 2010, 6:45 pm

Lol, I told him An actual NTSD series based on manga's - Page 10 649189

@Bgnin Well whatever it has to do with relatives death it'll be seinen...

by Guest January 4th 2010, 6:46 pm

wanna hear it..if yes I will pm it to yu or come on msn

by **Eredale** January 4th 2010, 6:48 pm

I forgot my msn pass and am too lazy to recreate it

PM and I may read it sometime

by Guest January 4th 2010, 6:48 pm

too lazy ....

by **Yush** January 4th 2010, 11:46 pm

Why not actually try to read what I said?

I'm handing this in to Tfw's contest. It's a story writing contest. Therefore, like a novel. I can;t hand in a script bro

And it's easy to make this into script form anyway, along with adding a couple more speeches and actions. This can STILL be used as the base.

by Guest January 5th 2010, 12:00 am

a bad one

by **Yush** January 5th 2010, 12:09 am

Whaddyu wanna chuck in? Plz, don't turn it into mega-seinen. Just make it one of everything. Like, right now, it's pretty much:
- School life
- Comedy
- Action
- Fantasy
- Sci-Fi

by Guest January 5th 2010, 12:14 am

well I was thinking,I will tel you via pm

some basic logic and some basic drama so it becomes interesting

by **Yush** January 5th 2010, 3:18 am

Oh yeah, I'll chuck in drama too (how could I forget that when I've been watching a couple of soaps )

Btw, your PM...how long will it take...

by Blkdrgn V January 5th 2010, 3:40 am

OK, first, there shouldn't be much talking about too much info or else it'll confuse everybody (Air Gear and Tenjou Tenge for example.) Here's my idea so far:

*shows a half hidden face with a smirking face* (you know the classics)
???: Finally. All the pieces are gathered
*scene shows a view of the man's back surrounded by corpse in a very bloody room*
*scene zooms in on a mail envelope that has the words "NO RETURN" written in blood* (havent got a good thing for it to say)
*scene goes to two boys walking to school*

I got more, but I don't have time to type it right now.

Oh yeah, Nave can you stop messing with the polls...

by **Yush** January 5th 2010, 4:42 am

Hoorayz, second thing BD sumbits -.-

by Blkdrgn V January 5th 2010, 6:21 am

Hey! It's small, but it's good.

by **Yush** January 5th 2010, 7:17 am

Yap, although you could've mentioned where they go and such. These are just random scenes atm

by Guest January 5th 2010, 10:01 am

that isnt a name ,plot or manuscript,that is just 2 frames of a page

and soups=/=drama

by **Yush** January 5th 2010, 10:28 pm

Bgnin IV wrote:that isnt a name ,plot or manuscript,that is just 2 frames of a page

and soups=/=drama

Ya, we knew the whole soap thing. And yah, unlike the mangakas that don't have time, we can at least work on the story first before working out the name -.-

by Guest January 5th 2010, 10:55 pm

Yush wrote:
Bgnin IV wrote:that isnt a name ,plot or manuscript,that is just 2 frames of a page

and soups=/=drama

Ya, we knew the whole soap thing. And yah, unlike the mangakas that don't have time, we can at least work on the story first before working out the name -.-

I gave you a example of the way I would go

used faust the drama as the base for it

by **N.D** January 5th 2010, 11:27 pm

well there is no mine genre i like more like Code Geass Death Note and Darker Then Black

by Nataniell January 5th 2010, 11:39 pm

Shouldn't you at least try drawing something related to your manga but with a random

background and stuff first? Manga without a plot is still manga... Plot with crappy drawings is just ridiculous...

by Blkdrgn V January 6th 2010, 3:58 am

It's easy to criticized, but doing something is different. Well what I want to do is create a cliffhanger so people will actually read the first chapter.

by **Yush** January 6th 2010, 6:59 am

Me and Bgnin are already working on it.

So far the ideas chucked out are:
AI robot = "Evil"/Manipulator guy who convinces/does something to our heroes to change the world when he acquires all the possible information.

The powers LOOK like magic, but they actually just bend data (with the data bending only cut in areas where we can distribute each type to each character) to make their so called "powers"

Bgnin wrote:fire heating and compressing oxegene,water controling water by manipulting its moleculs,lightning..robots..lighning...captain obvious

and earth with some sort of gravity or something

by Blkdrgn V January 6th 2010, 7:19 am

Well leave the weather science to me. For gravity, I think it should do something the persons center of gravity, the earth's core, and their legs. I'll PM you the details later, but you have to PM me first because I'm too lazy.

by **Yush** January 6th 2010, 11:41 am

PM you what?

by **Sarnicone** January 6th 2010, 1:08 pm

Can I still join as the storyline idealist? And maybe artist.

by **Yush** January 6th 2010, 8:38 pm

Ask Bgnin yourself. He is like our main storyline idealist now.

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