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Post by TaKeShi August 4th 2014, 3:49 pm

I don't how if it did reach a year or maybe for about  5 months since my last signature.
Btw, Comments and critics everyone? x)

Version 1:
After how many months Reus_s13

Version 2:
After how many months Reus_s12

It'll surely take a long time to get back to my old style XD
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Post by Mr-A August 4th 2014, 8:47 pm

A pretty cool smudge I gotta say. I am 0 with GFX so I can't tell you anything helpful. Perhaps, some good GFXers like Dew will provide you with constructive criticism. Keep this up!

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Post by Mountain Dew August 4th 2014, 9:50 pm

I am not that good as well but I will say what I can. I am quite lovin' this style of yours.
You need to work on lighting, depth and a little on blending, generally. Let me explain. Blending is to make the render like it's in the background, I mean the same atmosphere, this could be done using adjustment layers. In the lighting, there always must be a light source, the source of light in tags, sometimes it's flames, and sometimes you have to make one using the soft brush, and sometime it's other things like lens flare...etc. Depth is... hard to explain...Just check this out for everything: http://dawnstormgraphics.files.wordpress.com/2012/07/zenronguide.jpg

^That's in general, cause I checked out your DA and I saw what ya had.
V1: In this tag, the flow is nice, text and it's placement are good as well. But it needs depth and moar work on de lighting. Also the smudging would look much better if you smudged out a bit of the render, this would also help the blending. Needs a bit more blending as well. De border are too big, a 1/2 pixel should be moar than enough. This version is your better one.

@V2: The light source is available here but on the wrong place, right on his head, need to move moar to the left and need to be blended more. This version look kinda empty.

Great job mate, really nice work you've done here.
I made a smudge tut a while ago, try checking it out
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/058/5/2/wolf_smudge_sig_tut__by_awsantheawesome-d787n2c.png
I hope I helped ^.^
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Post by Rhino.Freak August 5th 2014, 4:47 pm

I like the second one! Its pretty simple and yet quite awesome.. KEEP IT UP MAN Very Happy
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Post by Hiei August 6th 2014, 3:46 pm

All I can say is, you still have your touch mate.Smile
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Post by TaKeShi August 6th 2014, 5:52 pm

@Dew
Thanks man Smile, yeah I was a bit off with the depth and lighting with those tags x)

@Rhino
Thanks mate x)

@Vergil
I guess you've improve a lot mate!
btaw thanks x)
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Post by Akshit October 7th 2014, 12:11 am

Both look awesome to me but the 2nd version seems neater....GG !!
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