After how many months
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Mr-A
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After how many months
I don't how if it did reach a year or maybe for about 5 months since my last signature.
Btw, Comments and critics everyone? x)
Version 1:
Version 2:
It'll surely take a long time to get back to my old style XD
Btw, Comments and critics everyone? x)
Version 1:
Version 2:
It'll surely take a long time to get back to my old style XD
Re: After how many months
A pretty cool smudge I gotta say. I am 0 with GFX so I can't tell you anything helpful. Perhaps, some good GFXers like Dew will provide you with constructive criticism. Keep this up!
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Re: After how many months
I am not that good as well but I will say what I can. I am quite lovin' this style of yours.
You need to work on lighting, depth and a little on blending, generally. Let me explain. Blending is to make the render like it's in the background, I mean the same atmosphere, this could be done using adjustment layers. In the lighting, there always must be a light source, the source of light in tags, sometimes it's flames, and sometimes you have to make one using the soft brush, and sometime it's other things like lens flare...etc. Depth is... hard to explain...Just check this out for everything: http://dawnstormgraphics.files.wordpress.com/2012/07/zenronguide.jpg
^That's in general, cause I checked out your DA and I saw what ya had.
V1: In this tag, the flow is nice, text and it's placement are good as well. But it needs depth and moar work on de lighting. Also the smudging would look much better if you smudged out a bit of the render, this would also help the blending. Needs a bit more blending as well. De border are too big, a 1/2 pixel should be moar than enough. This version is your better one.
@V2: The light source is available here but on the wrong place, right on his head, need to move moar to the left and need to be blended more. This version look kinda empty.
Great job mate, really nice work you've done here.
I made a smudge tut a while ago, try checking it out
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/058/5/2/wolf_smudge_sig_tut__by_awsantheawesome-d787n2c.png
I hope I helped ^.^
You need to work on lighting, depth and a little on blending, generally. Let me explain. Blending is to make the render like it's in the background, I mean the same atmosphere, this could be done using adjustment layers. In the lighting, there always must be a light source, the source of light in tags, sometimes it's flames, and sometimes you have to make one using the soft brush, and sometime it's other things like lens flare...etc. Depth is... hard to explain...Just check this out for everything: http://dawnstormgraphics.files.wordpress.com/2012/07/zenronguide.jpg
^That's in general, cause I checked out your DA and I saw what ya had.
V1: In this tag, the flow is nice, text and it's placement are good as well. But it needs depth and moar work on de lighting. Also the smudging would look much better if you smudged out a bit of the render, this would also help the blending. Needs a bit more blending as well. De border are too big, a 1/2 pixel should be moar than enough. This version is your better one.
@V2: The light source is available here but on the wrong place, right on his head, need to move moar to the left and need to be blended more. This version look kinda empty.
Great job mate, really nice work you've done here.
I made a smudge tut a while ago, try checking it out
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/058/5/2/wolf_smudge_sig_tut__by_awsantheawesome-d787n2c.png
I hope I helped ^.^
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Re: After how many months
I like the second one! Its pretty simple and yet quite awesome.. KEEP IT UP MAN
Re: After how many months
All I can say is, you still have your touch mate.
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Re: After how many months
@Dew
Thanks man , yeah I was a bit off with the depth and lighting with those tags x)
@Rhino
Thanks mate x)
@Vergil
I guess you've improve a lot mate!
btaw thanks x)
Thanks man , yeah I was a bit off with the depth and lighting with those tags x)
@Rhino
Thanks mate x)
@Vergil
I guess you've improve a lot mate!
btaw thanks x)
Re: After how many months
Both look awesome to me but the 2nd version seems neater....GG !!
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