Re: You tell i write:Invasion of breathing whales is out!

by iwanthidan September 13th 2009, 9:02 pm

Nymo wrote:make a new weed vs. crack one with me more important and LJ and eredale less, coz they never post in crack section.

Well idont know who the hell is most Popular member in Weed or crack okay?.I just tried to add members into story.

by Consural Hatake September 13th 2009, 10:23 pm

iwanthidan wrote:@Consural Hateke:I will write story in Turkish right?

However you like.I can translate them too.But it would be better if you write in English and let me fix the mistakes.

@Nymo
Umm...Who cares?

by **Volmort** September 13th 2009, 11:17 pm

I guess he cares the most

by Nymo September 14th 2009, 5:29 pm

I CARE!
but since you all don´t like it, i´ll go back and make sigs.

by iwanthidan September 14th 2009, 11:35 pm

I will write Basilkninja's story tomorrow.Breathing whales vs Hi-tech robots and huminity.It's going to be a funny story.

by iwanthidan September 15th 2009, 1:17 pm

BUMP!

New story ---------------------- :Invasion of breathing whales(basilkninja'sstory)-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Once upon a time,there were whales which can't breath at surface.But suddenly they started to breath at surface and gained their own minds and attacked humanity with hi-tech robots!!!(where the hell they come from?)But They were planing to destroy U.S.A and build their new empire in there!And they attacked Manhattan(in all disaster movies,New york gets fcked up).And destroyed half of manhattan with a giant tsunami!!.And They started to breed in flooded manhattan quickly.(omg)And whale hunters from canada came and killed some whales but Whales attacked hunters with hi-tech robots.Imma firing mah lazer!! attack killed all hunters!And Washington send patriot,tomahawk,andrew ryan missles to Whales H.Q.But it failed cuz whales securty system was so powerful!

At washington White house,Secret H.Q where attacks are planning...

President:Yo we gotta get rid of these fishy heads dude!

President's asslicker:Yeah sir i completely agree with you!! President FTW!!

Sexy assistance:Mister president i have a good news and bad news!

President(is a black rapper):Bad news first yo!

Sexy assistance:Whales deflected our missles!

President:Oh crap!,Good news?

Sexy assistance:Im still virgin! yaaaay!

President:Omg great lets celebrate this!!

President created biggest party in the world and eveybody around world came to party,There was strippers,dancing pedobears,and all kinds of stuff.Whales came to party too.But they suddenly ambushed by U.S forces and andrew ryan!Soldiers shot all whales and hi-tech robots.And Andrew ryan send them to rapture.Whales in New york(it's called wet york now).Created a Music channel called WTV Whale music television.And washed everybody's brain who watched it.And they started to control other countries for making them allies.And attacked U.S together.But sudddenly flying spagghetti monster came from sky and touched midgits with his noodly appandage and other soldiers died.And Galactus came and eat the planet.The end!
p.s:That was a parody story lol

by **Basikninja** September 15th 2009, 3:07 pm

Omg ty that was so funny ima firin my lazer XD yo Very Happy

by Hell_Major September 15th 2009, 3:50 pm

Lol the planet was eaten You tell i write:Invasion of breathing whales is out! - Page 4 38488

by iwanthidan September 15th 2009, 4:21 pm

basikninja2 wrote:Omg ty that was so funny ima firin my lazer XD yo

I luv İt lol thx for comment

by Nave I September 15th 2009, 6:03 pm

seriously, the grammer and english really sucked in this story -.-'

by iwanthidan September 20th 2009, 3:35 pm

I will wrote another story in 3 days guys Very Happy

.Keep wanting stories lol i dont have left You tell i write:Invasion of breathing whales is out! - Page 4 822282

by **Loop** September 20th 2009, 3:42 pm

iwanthidan wrote:I will wrote another story in 3 days guys .Keep wanting stories lol i dont have left

about what?

by ipsilonv September 21st 2009, 8:58 am

Seriously dude, your grammar and you syntax are horrible. I read your first story, and that was all I could manage. I don't want to be a total douche, but it's just too much. I've read better sentences translated with babel fish :/. I won't comment on the writing except to say that you shouldn't use Internet speak, or say "2 mafia members".. the correct way to write it is "two mafia members." I don't know how serious you are about writing... but if you really want to write, you need a lot of practice, beyond the grammar errors.

Keep it up though. And try to write in a less-annoying font color.

by iwanthidan September 23rd 2009, 9:47 am

@Loop: It's about a disease which infects all people in the world.(resident evil? lol)

@Ipsilonv:Thanks for your advices.I know my grammar bad.Im trying to learn English.I write good when i use my own language.English limits me.But i will try to follow your advices.Thanks.

by tobi is a good boy September 23rd 2009, 11:30 am

Sure, a good story needs great grammar and clear syntax, but it's the actual thinking going behind it that makes it awesome. I can now assure you that although iwanthidan dosen't have great grammar and syntax, his creativity and thought just makes his storys fantastic. Keep it up iwanthidan. Oh yeah, just a complaint:

I AIN'T IN THE F*CKING CRACK VS WEED STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! PUT ME IN!!!!!!!

That is all I need to say.

P.S Make an awesome Naruto ending, about what you think will happen, use all your creativity.

by iwanthidan September 23rd 2009, 1:28 pm

tobi is a good boy wrote:Sure, a good story needs great grammar and clear syntax, but it's the actual thinking going behind it that makes it awesome. I can now assure you that although iwanthidan dosen't have great grammar and syntax, his creativity and thought just makes his storys fantastic. Keep it up iwanthidan. Oh yeah, just a complaint:

I AIN'T IN THE F*CKING CRACK VS WEED STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! PUT ME IN!!!!!!!

That is all I need to say.

P.S Make an awesome Naruto ending, about what you think will happen, use all your creativity.

Yeah ive been thinking a naruto ending for a good time.Thanks for your advice tobi.I will work on it.

by tobi is a good boy September 24th 2009, 6:46 am

Yes yes, but just 2 major demands: Put me in Crack vs Weed and put Tobi in Naruto ending! Cause they rule! Well, it's your choice but yeah.

by Hell_Major October 6th 2009, 8:29 am

iwanthidan are you in the production of a new story

by iwanthidan October 6th 2009, 8:27 pm

I cant use forum nowadays guys.Im too fckin busy with fckin school.And because im working all day(and half of my day is at school)I dont get inspirate -_-

by **Little Jiraiya** October 6th 2009, 8:54 pm

Nave I wrote:
Bgnin wrote:yeah you did
you totaly did

LJ isn't more hentai adicted than I am

WRONG ......who is more addicted is not matters.....
what matters is who have the best sources and collections...
and i definitely have better sources than yours and i have better collections than yours ... spite

nice story of weed vs crack iwanthidan thumbs up

by iwanthidan October 6th 2009, 8:58 pm

Sexy LJ wrote:
Nave I wrote:
Bgnin wrote:yeah you did
you totaly did

LJ isn't more hentai adicted than I am
WRONG ......who is more addicted is not matters.....
what matters is who have the best sources and collections...
and i definitely have better sources than yours and i have better collections than yours ...

nice story of weed vs crack iwanthidan

Thanks dude.I wish i could i write more but i dont want to write.I just want to....rest a while.But im too busy with school. face palm

by Nave I October 6th 2009, 9:50 pm

Sexy LJ wrote:
Nave I wrote:
Bgnin wrote:yeah you did
you totaly did

LJ isn't more hentai adicted than I am
WRONG ......who is more addicted is not matters.....
what matters is who have the best sources and collections...
and i definitely have better sources than yours and i have better collections than yours ...

nice story of weed vs crack iwanthidan

I have a 9GB folder with doujin's only, and a 18GB folder with hentai movies....
yah! TAKE THAT!

by **Little Jiraiya** October 6th 2009, 10:48 pm

hentai movies..... i never save movies, only if they are good..
i save doujins only if i like them! so i dont have that much size .... but all the movies i saw are much more than 18GB together
i saw much more than urs... and i have better sources like i mentioned earlier

by Nave I October 6th 2009, 10:50 pm

it's not like I save everything... only the best stuff, I watched like a fucking lot more on tha i-net without dl'ing, too

by tobi is a good boy October 6th 2009, 11:14 pm

OMG... you guyz have turned this writing topic into a hentai argument. OK, so iwanthidan you take a well deserved rest, try think of a new theme when your boring history teacher is talking LOL.

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